Cowardly John ??

Cowardly John was advised by Mary to rob a bank.
胆少的 John 接受 Mary 建議 去打劫銀行.
she said: "You don't let the guards subduing you" "Go to a bank and show them you have many guns"
她說, "你不要讓警衛制伏你" "去到銀行給他們看你有很多槍".
"John decided to take Mary's advice.
John 決定接受 Mary's 引導.
He arrived the bank, rapped the window of counter,shook his guns in thier's face,
他到達銀行, 大力敲打櫃台的玻璃窗, 在職員面前搖動他的手槍.
and loudly said, "From now on you are taking orders from me. I want a biger bag of cash right now,
跟著大聲說. 現在這裏由我話事, 我現在即刻要一大袋錢,
when you had got cash in the bag, Quickly pass a cup of coffee and a piece of cake to me.
當你們把錢放完入袋之後,快快拿一杯咖啡和一件蛋糕給我.
The rest of time, I am so tired, one girl of you massage my body,
餘下時間,我很累,你們其中一個女孩幫我按摩一下.
All of you are going to kneel on the floor where you belong.
全部同我跪在地上,這地是屬於你們的.
Another thing, you know who is going to order a car let me escaping?
另外還有一件事,你們知道誰給我叫車讓我逃走?
"I certainly do" Standing behind him of the police screamed "Ours driver"
站在 John 身後的警察尖叫道: 我當然知道, 是我們的司機.


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