Any mistake ???

This is a very challenging design project, which gives me a good chance of applying my mechatronic knowledge to further enhancement in high durability of machinery design. My boss has recognited and complimented me on my success in using innovative idea and techniques.

Besides, I have been assigned to coordinate the project progress so as to ensure its completion date during the meeting of the TTT project.

To increase my knowledge and improve my abilities and skills , I am also keen on attending exhibitions related to machinery manufacture process and design.

I trust that my knowledge of computerized manufacturing design and solid experience would be conducive to making contributions to your company.

This is a very challenging design project. I have had the opportunity to use my knowledge in Mechatronic to tackle those issues in further design enhancement and to provide high durability in mechanical design. Moreover, I can also make use of my innovative ideas and techniques in the project. I have received recognitions and compliments from my supervisors for my efforts. Besides, I have been assigned to participate in relevant TTT project site meetings, to coordinate work progress and to ensure successful project completion on time. I am also keen on attending exhibitions related to Mechanical and design manufacture process to broaden my knowledge and skills, and to enhance my abilities. Finally, I hope that I could make use of my solid computerizes manufacturing knowledge, design knowledge and experience to provide contributions to the ABC.

Mistake 就没啦。。不过读起来有点 “不顺” 帮你改改它。
我的意见如下。。。（如果我老婆改可能会更好不过她现在没空，让她给说了很多次。。。。哎。。）



This is a very challenging project for me, I have the chances to use my knowledge to tackle those issues in further design enhancement. To provide high durability in mechanical design; also it's make me use to put on my innovative and technique ideas, in the same time i get the recognition and compliment from my supervisors.

Besides that, I have been assigned to participate relevant TTT project coordinate of work progress and ensure the project completion within the expected time.

I am keen to attend relate to Mechanical and design manufacture process exhibitions to broaden my knowledge and skills, and hopefully upgrading myself. Finally, I would like to use my knowledge and experience to provide better contribution to ABC.