請幫我修改此篇有關"鄭秀文Sammi"的短篇英文,多謝。

2011-03-10 7:29 am
請幫我修改此篇有關"鄭秀文Sammi"的短篇英文。
並補充或修改,多謝。

Everybody have their idol, so as I.
My idol is Sammi Cheung who is attractive and charming.
I love her for 15 years, and I have corrected more 50 albums.
Every time, I listen to her music, I am touched deeply by her voice.
In my mind, she's one of the most important people to me.
I am crazy about her.

I am looking forward to seeing her again.

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2011-03-10 3:10 pm
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I don't want to change too much from your original script, so here is my version based on yours:


Everyone have their idol, and so do I.
My idol is Sammi Cheng who I think is very attractive and charming.
I have been supporting her for 15 years and have collected more than 50 of her albums.
Whenever I listen to her music, her voice touched me deeply.
I think she is one of the most important people to me.
I can say that I am crazy about her and I am looking forward to meeting her again!
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2011-03-10 7:48 am
Original:
Everybody have their idol, so as I.
My idol is Sammi Cheung who is attractive and charming.
I love her for 15 years, and I have corrected more 50 albums.
Every time, I listen to her music, I am touched deeply by her voice.
In my mind, she's one of the most important people to me.
I am crazy about her.

I am looking forward to seeing her again.

In World,Everybody have their favourite food,films,actors,singer
and i have the favourite idol too!
My Dream idol is Sammi Cheung,who is born in Hong Kong,Have an Attractive appearances and charming sounds.
i support her for fifteen years and i have collected fifty albums of her songs,
the reason i love her is when i listen to her music ,i get moving deeply and happiness about her voices
i also thi nk she is one of my important people for me all in my brain,i feel i am crazy and jubilant all about her everything,such as her matrimony,her style ,her mood.......
i am really looking forward to seeing her everywhere i can !again and again!

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