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2011-03-10 5:26 am

我大概想講:隻熊食咗個女仔，之後去採花，之後同熊去老狼屋企，老狼好擔心，之後食飯，之後各自番屋企。
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suddenly,Gigantean Mr.bear appeared from the tree. Mr.bear know the big bad girl bully the little wolfie. Mr.bear feel very angry.he to kill the big bad girl and ate her.
little wolfie to thanks Mr.bear . After ,little wolfie friends know big bad girl ate the apple pie and jam sandwiches ,so wolfie and friend to look for the beautiful
flower to give old granny wolf. Next,little wolfie see Mr.bear .They went along the road the road. Night came, they arrive old granny's wolf's cottage .The
old granny wolf very worry little wolfie . They are the dinner. Final,they go home by one .

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2011-03-10 5:38 am

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Suddenly, Gigantean Mr. Bear appeared from the tree. Mr. Bear knew the big bad girl bully the little wolfed. Mr. Bear felt very angry. He wanted to kill the big bad girl and eat her. Little wolfed thanked Mr. Bear. After that, little wolfed friends knew big bad girl had eaten the apple pie and jam sandwiches, so wolfed and friend looked for the beautiful flower to give the old granny wolf. Then, the little wolfed saw Mr. Bear .They went along the road. Night had came, they arrived the old granny's wolf's cottage .The old granny wolf was very worried about little wolfed. They had the dinner then. Finally, they went home one by one.

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