可以幫我指正這篇英文文章上所有的文法錯誤並矯正嗎?

2011-03-07 12:12 am
這是一篇有關「更好的英文,更好的人生」的演說稿子--長度三分鐘,

是自己寫的,可是因為文法不熟,所以可能會有許多錯誤,

而且好像有點文不對題,可以幫我修修看嗎?

In fact, English is not far fromus, whether it is movies, TV shows, computer games, English is every where. ifyou want to enjoy in good time, you have to understand all the vocabulary, sentenceand even articles in English. However, enjoy the fun is not thebest reason for me, but my dream is.
When I was a child, I have had a dream, I want to be a person like Chang, Chung-Mou ﹝張忠謀﹞He makes a lot of money and also spend a lot ofmoney to helps others. But, How can Mr.Chang do it? One of the reason is veryimportant, he is fluent in English, studying well-known U.S. university,directly face to face talk with foreigner media and companies, and always canreceive the first news from international.
Learning English is like a feast can be taken away! Better English,better life. I know and I do my best to make it come true.Thank you and have a nice day.
更新1:

對不起,第一句是--English is not far from us,才對

回答 (2)

2011-03-07 12:15 am
✔ 最佳答案
沒有fromus這個單字
2011-03-07 12:27 am
很多單字都連在一起耶
而且好像一分鐘都不到說...


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