英文作文(1)請求狠評 (urgent)
2011-03-02 1:54 am
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1. Any grammatical mistakes/words incorrectly used?
2. Any comments on the content/structure?
3. Is the format correct?
回答 (4)
2011-03-02 2:52 am
✔ 最佳答案
The letter is well written. I can only suggest some pointers.1. Syntax correction:
Teacher may also need to spend time punishing misbehaved students.
(Is it always a punishment ? Not necessarily! It can just be a telling off. )
Teacher may also need to spend time dealing with misbehaving students.
2. Some grammar and writing style correction:
Furthermore, ......relationship between the children and themselves
These are the reasons why I am in favour of it.
參考: bilingual English Cantonese teacher
2011-03-10 9:14 pm
AbcDef,
Can't you simplify the first sentence of the third paragraph by beginning with
" Homeschooling/Home teaching further improves the relationship between
parents and their children as there is......." , just to cite one example.
Can't you simplify the first sentence of the third paragraph by beginning with
" Homeschooling/Home teaching further improves the relationship between
parents and their children as there is......." , just to cite one example.
2011-03-10 7:40 pm
1冇乜,
if many students are absent啱d,好過when
spend time on punishing
20好過twenty,過10都寫數字
2有反問句,都幾句.
3正確
if many students are absent啱d,好過when
spend time on punishing
20好過twenty,過10都寫數字
2有反問句,都幾句.
3正確
2011-03-02 11:47 pm
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