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These set of movies are about three exploring parties in the South Pole. They discovered suddenly that one startled day snowstorm was coming soon, they must escape instantly (reverse order), but their vehicle was too small in which couldn’t accompany eight sled dogs to escape together. Therefore, the eight sled dogs were abandoned and struggled for their survivals in the wild. They were nearly at the edge of death. resists stubbornly the century snowstorm on one's own (Awkward, I cannot get what you wanted to say). The explorer who was securely rescued when the snowstorm was tranquil, then he returned to save the eight teammates immediately. Although this set of movies were the action movies, but (Remark, when you have used “although” in the first sentence, you must NOT use “but” for the following sentence. Please distinguish this difference from Chinese). Also, it had a very thorough sentimental plot. I looked in depth to this set of movie, when the snowstorm comes, the eight sled dog was stranded by the collar in the outdoors in which they could not run away, I felt very angry with sadness, the vitality of this movie was the dog’s master didn't let loose the collar or places them in the indoor, but the distressful part was because there was a sled dog weren’t not able to break the collar and died. Moreover, there was a sled dog........... This set of movies also included many amazing climaxes except the tear gas, because some sections were about the journey of exploration in the ice, cannot move, how does he direct the sled dog to pull him to come out (Awkward, unknown meaning). This process was thrilling. This set of movies were very splendid, it demonstrated the beauty of the iceberg and the glacier, and the magnificent sight ….. (Of what magnificent sight?). In addition, it showed some fearful scenes…... (What were the uses of those fearful scenes? What do you think and feel about them? Explain more),....... of the film which was very real.........

These set of movies are about three exploring parties in the South Pole foreseen the fact that a snowstorm is coming soon. They must escape immediately, but their vehicle is too small to accommodate eight sled dogs. The sled dogs struggled to survive, yet the explorers had been rescued. When the snowstorm restored to a tranquil state, they returned to the base to save the eight teammates right away.

Although these set of movies is an action movie, the plot has its sentimental touch. Tears rolled down my cheeks when the snowstorm came, the eight sled dogs were stranded by the collar were unable to run away from the disaster. I felt a pang of sympathy for those dogs as to why their Masters did not loose their collars. Sadness had occupied me as well since some of them injured or even died.

These set of movies also have many twists and turns which kept me at the edge of my seat. Some sections were about an exploration in the ice, the escaping process is definitely thrilling. The movies are splendid indeed in the sense that it had demonstrated the magnificent glacier. Apart from enjoying the beauty of the glacier, the story itself was certainly an enthralling one. Therefore I would highly recommend this movie to anyone who likes adventure and natural scenery.