(英文)我崇敬的人。請大家幫忙修改

2011-02-28 10:31 pm
題目是‘我崇敬的人’
請大家幫忙修改,越嚴越好~

I very admire J.K.Rowling. For me, she is a very great writer. She wrote the famous book, Harry Potter. Read this book can let me live in the dream. I am surprise for this book's everything. I'm really thank J.K.Rowling wrote this wonderful book. Beethoven is a genius. I think J.K.Rowling is a genius, too.

我想表達的中文大意是:
我非常佩服J.K.羅琳,對我而言,他是一個非常偉大的作家,他寫了一本知名的書,哈利波特。閱讀這本書可以可以讓我沉浸在夢裡。我非常驚
訝書裡的一切(指內容)。我很謝謝J.K.羅琳寫出了這樣美好的書。貝多芬是一個天才,我覺得J.K.羅琳也是一個天才。



麻煩大家了~謝謝!

回答 (2)

2011-03-01 1:53 pm
✔ 最佳答案
這是我更正的。希望有幫助。

I admire Ms. J. K. Rowling very much. To me, she is one of the greatest writers. She is the author of the famous Harry Potter books. When reading these books, I feel like living in the dreams of fantasy. I am surprised by everything in these books. I am truly thankful to Ms. J. K. Rowling for wring these wonderful books. Beethoven is a genius. I think Ms. J. K. Rowling is a genius too.
參考: myself
2011-03-01 1:13 am
I admire J.K Rowling very much. To me, she is a very great writer. She wrote the famous Harry Potter. Reading this book let me live in the dreams. I am astonished by every details of this book. I am very thankful that J.K. Rowling wrote this wonderful book. Beethoven was a genius. I think J.K. Rowling is a genius, too.


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