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Intrinsic 係adverb，唔可以當 noun 錦用。Appearance亦唔需要加the

我會錦翻譯:
Personally, inner and outer beauty are equally important.

如果你想用番appearance既，可以用character代替intrinsic
所以你亦可以話: Appearance and character are equally important to me.

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對我而言 = as far as i am concerned

不可以
External with the internal equally important.

不可以。
你翻譯的那句[The appearance and the intrinsic is the same important thing for me.]
就會變成[外觀和內在同樣重要的是我]
這樣的話人家很難明白你再說什麼。

加標點符號[,]令句子完整
The appearance and the intrinsic is the same important , thing for me.

譯成[外觀和內在都是一樣的重要，對我來說。]