我的自我介紹 中文跟英文版 拜託英文好的大大幫我看一下><

(基本上用你的口氣）

Hello teachers, I'm three years in Class B of the Data Processing x x-x, xx years old, living in Taichung City.> Dear respected teachers, I am a junior in class B of the Data Processing department. I am xx years old and I live in TaiChong city. My family has my mother, my brother and me a total of three people, my mother is a housewife, my brother graduated from college currently has military service.> My family consists of three members: my mother, my elder brother and me. My mother is a full time housewife. My elder brother had graduated from college and he is currently in military service.I usually interest is playing computer, listening to music and writing.
> I am interested in playing games on the computer, listening to music, and writing.

My favorite subject is Chinese, accounting, and introduction to computers …
> My favorite subjects are Chinese, Accounting, and Introduction to Computer Science. I would like to continue to the next "information" on this road ahead.> I would like to continue to progress on the path of “Information Systems”.

I hope to university to read and information management will be funded, or multimedia design department in this regard.我希望升上大學能去讀資管、會資、或多媒體設計這一方面的科系。 > I hope to continue my education in an university and major in Informaton Management, Accounting and Information, or Multimedia design. Subjects read their own interest but also better able to handy, I want to learn the skills and knowledge.> I would be doing much better if I could study the subjects of my interests and I would learn the skills and knowledge that I want to learn. I hope that the future can find a good job so that they are proud!>I hope I can find a good job so my family would be pround of me.

2011-02-23 08:35:42 補充：
最後第二行，改成：
> Studying the subjects of my interests, I think I will obtain those skills and knowledge better.

2011-02-23 08:41:20 補充：
(受到字限，所以放在這裡）
最後一行=〉After college, I hope I can find a good job to realize my dreams and my family would be proud of me.

2011-02-23 11:43:53 補充：
（因囘答字限，在這裡補充）

以下這句的翻譯，改成=〉My hobbies include surfing the net (或 playing computer games), listening to music, and writing.

我平時的興趣是打電腦、聽音樂以及寫作。

括號内的字供您替換，如果比較合適。

2011-02-23 11:46:26 補充：
'會資‘ => Accounting and Information Technology.

參考：http://www.ait.ccu.edu.tw/ccu_ait_www/news/news.asp

Hello teachers, I'm three years in Data Processing Yi Ban x x-x, xx years old, living in Taichung City.
Good morning teachers, I'm a class Yi Junior in Data Processing Department, XXX, XX years old, living in Taichung City

My family has my mother, my brother and me a total of three people, my mother is a housewife, my brother graduated from college currently has military service.
My family includes my mother, my older brother and me, total of 3 members. My mother is a housewife, my older brother already graduated from college, he's currently enlisted in military service.

I usually interest is playing computer, listening to music and writing.
My favorite subject is Chinese, accounting, and introduction to computers
My interests are playing computer games, listening to music, and writing (寫什麼?). My favorite subjects are Chinese, accounting, and introduction to computers.

I would like to continue to the next "information" on this road ahead.
I would like to continue pursuing in Information Technology for my future ahead.


I hope to university to read and information management will be funded, or multimedia design department in this regard.
Hopefully I can get into University to major in Information Management or Multimedia Design


Subjects read their own interest but also better able to handy, I want to learn the skills and knowledge.
Majoring in subjects those I'm interested in will be able to help me learn the skills and knowledge more interesting.


Hope that the future can find a good job so that they are proud!
I hope in the future I can find a great job so my family can be proud of me!



2011-02-24 11:37:42 補充：
from yahoo dictionary:

enlist
1. 徵募, 使入伍, 徵(兵)

currently enlisted: 就是現在被徵(兵)~

enlisted是過去式因為"使入伍, 徵(兵)"是已經發生過的事, 所以前面才加"currently"~

=)

2011-02-24 11:43:38 補充：
from yahoo dictionary:

從軍, 入伍, 應募
Many people enlisted for the defense of their country. 許多人為了保衛國家而從軍了。

http://tw.dictionary.yahoo.com/dictionary?p=enlist

Teachers is good, I was processing a three-year b class of XXX, XX years old this year, and lived in Taichung city.My mother, my brother and me a total of three people, MOM is a pipe, and my brother has graduated from the University is currently for military service.
My usual interests are playing computer, listening to music, and writing.My favorite subject is an introduction to literature, accounting and computer sth
I would like to continue in the future to "information" along the way.I want to go on to University to read information pipes, funding, or multimedia design courses in this area.Are interested in reading their account relatively comfortable, can learn the skills and knowledge I wanted.Expect the future to get a good job, make yourself proud!




你好教師，我是在資料處理一班三年 x-x xx 年舊居住在台中市。我家有我的媽媽、 弟弟和我一共有三人，我的母親是一個家庭主婦，目前從大學畢業的哥哥有軍事服務。
我通常的興趣正在聽音樂和編寫的電腦。我最喜歡的科目是中文，會計和電腦 … …
我想未來繼續在這條路上的下一步"資訊"。在這方面我希望能讀大學和資訊的款項管理或多媒體設計系。主題閱讀自己的興趣，但也能夠更好地方便，我想學的技能和知識。希望未來可以找到一份好工作，使他們感到很自豪 ！