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I think rain is a symbol of a big shock or big memory. This is because the rain got into his head, he ha d some odd behaviors. Actions for example walking slowly, stepping softly etc many possibilities could represent this big shock event . "Love" can be represented by rain in my opinion. He said all he heard as he lied in his bed was a slishity -slosh of water. This meant he had a lot of thoughts about his lady or love d her all day long since he met her like rain dropping. Besides, he could not handstand because he can overflow (I don’t understand, it seems awkward) . I think this meant that h e could not admit this anymore about the truth of love . Also, he was just at the point that right before his explosion of joy and happiness . Everyone who become s weird and behaves differently than before, author has same co nsequences of love (serious grammatical error, unknown meaning) that can make people think, "I think he changed somehow." (It is difficult to understand the brown highlighted part ) Until the 4th sentence, I still understand what they are meant. However, from the fifth sentence onward, I cannot get what you wanted to say as what are they symbolizing or how do they being so important throughout the whole story? Please explain more. You should write your article by elaborating more details about the content of the story in the 1st paragraph. Then, you can continue to express your feelings or comment on the story in the following paragraphs based on the climax/ crucial issues which were significant in the whole story. As I don’t know what your story is and therefore it is highly recommended to separate the content and the feeling part in your article. Please! Please! Please! Do not try to tell your feelings by using incorrect vocabularies and through complex form of sentences. You cannot manage it well.

Sorry Iam only P.5.
I think rain is a symbolism of a big shock or big memory. Because the rain got into his head, he has certain odd behaviors . Walking slowly, stepping softly... many possibilities that can represent this big shock event, "love" is the symbolism of rain in my opinion. He says all he hears as he lies in his bed is a slishity-slosh of water. This means he's just full of thinking about his lady (?) or love all day long, since he meets her like rain dropping. Besides, he cannot handstand because he can overflow. I think this means he cannot stand himself anymore to deny the truth of love, or he is just at the edge right before exploding his joy or happiness of love. At the shift, like everyone who become weird and behaves differently than before, author has same consequences of love that can make people think, "I think he changed somehow."

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~ difficult for anyone to proofread your reflection without reading the poem. “Rain” by Silverstein?

The rain may represent thoughts/feelings. That is beyond the point. One answerer did check your grammar.

Lied (past tense) means to say something which is not true. It should be lay.