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I like outdoor activities. My favourite sport is hiking. Hiking is an exercise with both physical and mental benefits. I like hiking because it not only improves my physical fitness, but also helps me to relax. I feel very pleasant (relax) when I see those beautiful landscapes along the paths. Hiking gives (provides) me more chances to contact the nature. I enjoy breathing fresh air in countryside because it makes me feel refreshing. Hiking is a kind of sports not only for the elderly, but also for the youths and children. Hiking with friends or family is really fun.


2011-02-13 15:17:46 補充：
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My favourite sport is hiking.I like outdoor activities.Hiking is an exercise with both physical and mental benefits.I like hiking because it not only can improve my physical fitness,but it can also help me to relax.I feel very pleasant when I saw beautiful landscaps along the path.Hiking gives me more chance to contact the nature.I enjoy breathing fresh air in countryside because it makes me feel refreshing.Hiking is a kind of sports not only for the elderly,but also for theyouths and children.Hiking with friends or family is really fun.

My favourite sport is hiking. I like outdoor activities. Hiking is an exercise with both physical and mental benefits. I like hiking because it not only can improve my physical fitness, but it can also help me to relax. I feel very pleasant when I saw beautiful landscapes along the path. Hiking give me more chance to contact the nature. I enjoy breathing fresh air in countryside because it makes me feel refreshing. Hiking is a kind of sport not only for the elderly, but also for the youth and children. Hiking with friends or family is really fun.

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