幫我翻譯英文!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

我幫你改左d(原文),因為有d錯處.

作弊
我看完後,我覺得娜塔利是一個做什麼事都沒有勇氣和過於擔心的人,而她的朋友佐伊是一個什麼都很勇敢和會為朋友著想的人,所以佐伊才幫助娜塔利出書,我們應該學習她的勇敢,如果不是有佐伊幫助娜塔利的話,可能娜塔利就不會有出書的機會,這是我覺得佐伊值得我們學習的地方.

Cheat
After I have read this book, I think that Na Tali is worry too much and no courage for anything. Her friend, Zoe is brave and for the frined's sake, so she helps Na Tali to publish a book. I think we should learn Zoe because she is brave to try. If Zoe don't help Na Tali, she don't have the opportunity to publish a book. Therefore, I think we should learn from Zoe.

2011-02-10 02:50:05 補充：
有錯;再改
Cheat
After I read this book, I think that Na Tali is worry too much and no courage for anything. Her friend, Zoe is brave and for the frined's sake, so she helps Na Tali to publish a book. I think we should learn from Zoe because she is brave to try.

2011-02-10 02:50:55 補充：
If Zoe don't help Na Tali, she may not the opportunity to publish a book. Therefore, I think we should learn from Zoe.

(因字數所限,分開左2次)

Cheat
I have read, I do not think Nata Li is a sense of people who do have to worry too much, and her friend Zoe is what friends are very brave and will help the sake of a person, so Zoe Na Tali book was to help, so we learn at her brave, if not help Nata Li Zoe, it may not have a book she Na Tali's machine, which I think is worth Zoe Learning.

Cheat
I have read, I do not think Nata Li is a sense of people who do have to worry too much, and her friend Zoe is what friends are very brave and will help the sake of a person, so Zoe Na Tali book was to help, so we learn at her brave, if not help Nata Li Zoe, it may not have a book she Na Tali's machine, which I think is worth Zoe Learning

Cheat
I have read, I do not think Nata Li is a sense of people who do have to worry too much, and her friend Zoe is what friends are very brave and will help the sake of a person, so Zoe Na Tali book was to help, so we learn at her brave, if not help Nata Li Zoe, it may not have a book she Na Tali's machine, which I think is worth Zoe Learning.
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Cheats
I read Hou, I think Natali is a do what thing are does not sense and do what thing are too worry of people, and she of friends Zoe is a what are is brave and session help friends sake of a a people, so Zoe only help Natali out book, so we only learning she of brave of Department, if is not has Zoe help Natali words, may she Natali on does not has out book of machine, this is I think Zoe worth of learning.