修改英文句子 urgent!~

2011-02-08 7:45 am

1.poor people cannot afford expensive medical cost if they need to hospitalize. Therefore, they will leave the hospital very soon even though their health condition has not recovered.2.poor people are unusually engaged in shoplifting and drug trafficking.3.Resources devoted in other aspects such as education, economics and transport will be declined
句子寫得不太好懇請修改非常急請幫忙!~

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龜博士

2011-02-08 8:34 am

✔ 最佳答案

1. People in poverty cannot afford high medical cost associated with hospitalization. Consequently, they are discharged from the hospital before fully recovered.

2. People in poverty are thought to be associated with crimes such as shoplifting and drug trafficking. / People in poverty usually get involved in crimes such as shoplifting and drug trafficking.

3. Resources available in the area of education, economy improvement and transportation will be greatly cut back. (唔多肯定你呢句的意思﹐你寫中文或者我可以準確D幫你)。

參考: I live in the US.

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