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My Own TranslationThis report is related to the criticism about the management facilities which implement to the new spots in Ocean Park.

At first, there is a lot of experience for Ocean Park on operating past aquariums, however, having observed the facilities in new aquarium and its overview, the management of Ocean Park still haven’t taken serious consideration and satisfied the needs of the visitors, for example the types of different ocean creatures are comparatively fewer than the old aquarium, also there isn’t have enough space let the people to appreciate the beauty of the ocean creatures etc. Moreover, there is lacking of supplementary facilities for instance there are only two washrooms in the whole aquarium. This will result in forcing the visitors to wait for a longer time. Nevertheless, the floor of the washroom is wet.
Second, as the entry controlling system is doing badly, it affects a lot of audiences enjoying their journeys, the audiences cannot watch the shows comfortably.
Third, the food is way too expensive, for example it costs $28 for only a cup of milk tea. Hence, a lot of people need to bring their own meal. Consequently, people won’t go to the restaurants, there are many empty seats, it leads to the deterioration of profit of Ocean Park. Both the visitors and Ocean Park will be the losers.
Fourth, Ocean Park hasn’t realized that atmosphere of being green and environmental friendly is more vigorous, the awareness of saving the Earth is much stronger. In contrast, it didn’t announce the origins of getting those ocean creatures, death of those creatures etc, therefore, the environmentalists protest and finally Ocean Park damage their reputation.
In conclusion, I think that opening up the new aquarium is to attract more tourists, but there are a lot of problem occurs in various aspects i.e. food prices, visitor control etc.

2011-02-06 13:05:40 補充：
Remark: Do not choose 001, 002 and 003 translations, they have a lot of grammatical errors for example inconsistent of tenses, run on setences or fragments.This won't help you.

2011-02-06 13:18:52 補充：
Add "the" after atomsphere in line 17
Add "in Hong Kong" after "vigorous" in line 18

This report is about the new attractions of Ocean Park community in all aspects of management xx ignore the criticism.
First of all, Ocean Park has extensive experience in operating the old aquarium, but the new venue of the facilities, the landscape is still not properly consider and meet the needs of the public. For example: marine species less than the old building, the location was not any thought to provide sufficient may be closer look at the whole picture of marine life. In addition, facilities are also inadequate management, the venue only two toilets, people have to waste a lot of time in the queue. and the floor wet.
Secondly, the crowd split in the management approach has also done well, resulting in a lot of people inside, people are not comfortable to watch too.
Furthermore, the venue of the food prices are too high, 28 yuan a cup of tea but also led to many people prefer to bring their own food, restaurant, high vacancy rate, which increases the cost of Ocean Park, and profits also fell, to the public and marine parks are bad .
Finally, the Ocean Park in Hong Kong have not noticed the rising awareness of ecological conservation, where channels have not been announced the introduction of marine organisms, and the number of deaths, so that environmental groups to protest and undermine the image of Ocean Park.
I think the purpose of opening the new museum is to attract more crowd, but the Ocean Park in the landscape, facilities, people, food prices, dealing with various aspects of ecological issues are also something wrong]

This report is about the new attractions of Ocean Park community in all aspects of management xx ignore the criticism.
First of all, Ocean Park has extensive experience in operating the old aquarium, but the new venue of the facilities, the landscape is still not properly consider and meet the needs of the public. For example: marine species less than the old building, the location was not any thought to provide sufficient may be closer look at the whole picture of marine life. In addition, facilities are also inadequate management, the venue only two toilets, people have to waste a lot of time in the queue. and the floor wet.
Secondly, the crowd split in the management approach has also done well, resulting in a lot of people inside, so people are not comfortable viewing.
Furthermore, the venue of the food prices are too high, 28 yuan a cup of tea but also led to many people prefer to bring their own food, restaurant, high vacancy rate, which increases the cost of Ocean Park, and profits also fell, to the public and marine parks are bad .
Finally, the Ocean Park in Hong Kong have not noticed the rising awareness of ecological conservation, where channels have not been announced the introduction of marine organisms, and the number of deaths, so that environmental groups to protest and undermine the image of Ocean Park.
I think the purpose of opening the new museum is to attract more crowd, but the Ocean Park in the landscape, facilities, people, food prices, dealing with other aspects of ecological problems but also has its drawbacks
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The report is related to the public on various aspects of the new Ocean Park attractions XX management regardless of criticism.First, the Park has been operating the old Aquarium experience, but the new facilities within the stadium, the landscape is still not properly taken into account and to meet the needs of the public, e.g. fewer species of marine life simulation of old, and didn't provide enough location is close to see marine life in its entirety,. Furthermore, in managing facilities, insufficient, there were only two toilets, people want to waste a lot of time in the queue. and the floor wet.Second, is doing a good job in the management approach crowd streaming, resulting in a lot of people in the field, people can't comfortably watching too.In addition to the venue and food prices are too high, a cup of tea with milk to $ 28, led to a lot of people prefer to bring their own food, restaurant high vacancy rates, which increases costs of marine parks, and profits were reduced, and Ocean Park are adverse to the public.Finally, marine park also didn't notice the rising awareness of conservation in Hong Kong, is not released from the channels through the introduction of marine life, quantity and deaths, so that environmental groups protest, damage to marine parks of the image.I think that open in a new Museum was designed to attract more people, but the Park's landscape, supporting facilities, people, food prices, also has to deal with ecological problems, and other anomalies