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Following two social workers who work to help the residents as the deal with the difficulties of relocation
跟隨幫助有遷居困難的社工→指此紀錄片的內容
,this revealing documentary film
此揭露紀綠片→ 整句的主詞；reveling在此當形容詞 因此要用ing
, shot over several months
此句是補充說明this revealing documentary film
指此紀錄片是經過好幾個月的拍攝
offers its audience a glimpse into lives of impoverished old people
提供觀眾一窺貧困老人家的生活。
offer是本句的主要動詞

2011-02-05 23:04:38 補充：
簡單來說本句就是在說
This revealing documentary film offers its audience a glimpse into lives of impoverished old people.

而Following two social workers who work to help the residents as the deal with the difficulties of relocation 和 shot over several months
兩個都是補充說明此紀錄片

Following....relocation，整個看成分詞片語，意義上的主詞可能是 you or we
this revealing documentary film　才是整句話的主詞　動詞為offers
revealing當形容詞用，修飾documentary
(which was) shot over several months,關代被省略，可以視為插入句，它的先行詞是film. 作補充說明

1. Revealing 式形容詞用來修飾 documentary film.

2. 其實有很多"逗號"你可以把他想成"括號". 只是用來補充前面的句子. 即使把他省略掉也沒有問題.

最簡練的句子會是:

Following two social workers (1) , this revealing documentary file (2) offers its audience a glimpse into lives of impoverished old people. = 跟隨著社工們,此紀錄片提供觀眾一窺貧困老人的生活

(1) 只是用來補充說明前面提到的 social workers.
who work help the residents as the deal with the difficulties of relocation = 幫助有遷徙困難居民的社工

(2) 只是用來補充說明前面提到的 revealing documentary film.
shot over several months = 經歷了好幾個月的拍攝

因為revealing是形容詞是給人啟發的的意思
這部給人啟發的紀錄片
Following two social workers
who work to help the residents
as the deal with the difficulties of relocation,
this revealing documentary film,
(which is) shot over several months,
offers its audience a glimpse into lives
of impoverished old people.

as是例如
Such animals as foxes and squirrels have bushy tails. 有些動物, 如狐和松鼠, 有蓬鬆的尾巴。

deal是政策


Following two...
類似
Being hit by his father, John always cries.
=After John is hit by his father, he always cries.

Getting a good grade, Mary is very happy.
=Because Mary got a good grade, she is very happy.

Following two social workers (who work to help the residents as the deal with the difficulties of relocation), this revealing documentary film, (shot over several months),offers its audience a glimpse into lives of impoverished old people.
括弧裡
who到relocation是形容two social workers
是怎樣的social workers
是專門幫助居民的social workers
是怎樣的幫助
(as那邊 as是例如 和like或such as差不多)
例如強制疏散的政策 relocation=強制疏散
第二個括弧前面
這部給人啟發的紀錄片
shot over括弧那邊 補充說是拍了超過幾個月的紀錄片 括弧結束
提供它(電影)的觀眾一個對窮困的老人們的窺視


要是沒有那些補充說明 就是括弧那些
減少過的句子變成這樣
(Following two social workers, )this revealing documentary film offers its audience a glimpse into lives of impoverished old people.
這裡第一句也可以減少
就剩下This revealing documentary film offers its audience a glimpse into lives of impoverished old people.是一個完整句子
主詞This revealing documentary film
動詞offers
受詞its audience
後面還要加提供給它的觀眾什麼東西
就像I gave him....什麼東西 I gave him a cake.
a glimpse~old people就是a cake
Following到workers那邊能縮小
就像
Being hit by his father, John always cries.
縮小成John always cries.就是一個完整的句子
Being hit by his father是解釋 被他爸爸打了以後 JOHN總是哭
Following到workers也是解釋
我猜是After it followed two social workers的縮寫
Ater it followed two social workers, this revealing documentary film offers its audience a glimpse into lives of impoverished old people.
it=this revealing documentary film

2011-02-05 23:08:49 補充：
哀
上面的人解釋那麼好
我一ㄍ專長都沒有
哀
連解釋都ㄅ會
哀

2011-02-05 23:19:34 補充：
relocation後的逗號是一定要加
因為After John is hit by his father, he always cries.中間的逗號一定要加
John always cries after he is hit by his father.這句就不能加逗號
shot over several months前面和後面的逗號
就像
The boy, who is very tall, is my brother.
我不知道能不能變成
The boy who is very tall is my brother.沒逗點

2011-02-05 23:19:38 補充：
補充(就是跟上面沒關的補充)
逗點的東西我看過有人回答逗點是停頓沒有特別規定
像
有人說Today, I want to talk about.........Today後面有停頓
也有人說Today I want to talk about..........沒停頓
還有I want to drink something too.
I want to drink something, too.
too前有沒有逗點也都有人用 課本兩種都有看過