English Writing

Dear John:

How are you? I miss you for long time.

My school life was not good in the recent year. Through the computer in the school, I have made a girlfriend - Suki online who was a whore. Her charge is slightly expensive, approximately $500 for kiss, $1000 for sex and $5000 for sleeping over night. Perhaps I was very handsome. She was willing to make love with me free of charge in my school toilet. However, my tutor discovered us while sex had been being carried out. The tutor called the police at length.

Although my girlfriend was proved as "willingness to do", I was still arrested by the police. Later, I will be judged by the court because my girlfriend was only 12 years old. As sex with girl less than 16 is a crime in Hong Kong, I am probably faced with some years' imprisonment. My school life would be ended by the court next year.

The school life in Hong Kong is so different from that of the broading school. In the day school of Hong Kong, we can go whoring anytime anywhere after school but the charge of the sex is quite expensive. It is $800 each time in average, without including travelling fee if necessary.

On the other hand, I feel life in the broading school lacks freedom As you would live in the broading school most of the time, you can't make sex with girl anytime. Moreover, all the sex tape, CD and magazine are prohibited in the school. You can only make love with your classmates on staircase silently. Although making love with classmates was free of charge, you haven't the right to select a girl you like most. The only one advantage is that majority of college girl haven't any discease while the Hongkong whores are more dirty.

However, I will study very hard in jail and never make love with whore less than 16.

Good luck.

Yours sincerely.

(314 words)

Dear John,
I appreciate your reception at Oxford last year and are pleased to be back to Stanley co-ed boarding sc where I have been allowed home once a month.Let me assure your Latin ,economics contrasting with my Chinese ,Law will reach our graduation degrees soon!
We are confident that the excellence of our performance to society earning will prove both a handsome rewards and a strong inducement for our future generations of how to further their studies!

Yours sincerely,
Toming88

2011-02-01 15:06:38 補充：
Dear Eng
After savour the sample of that man29,,we regret his essay content are very bad degradedwrong ,aged 16 back to 12 girl,impossible to study from sc-prison!, than a letter primary!
A better sample submitted u to learn the sentence ,content and learn something delivered to your heart.

2011-02-01 15:10:56 補充：
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Hey the guy who asked this question
Don't take the answer seriously
That guy wrote something rude
So if this is homework
Don't hand it to your teacher