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I think the last part of “A Foolish Man Buy Shose"is the most interesting because in the last part about a foolish man's falling is very interesting . Event their own to help their own shoes , do not believe their own feet.Follow these would like to believe the size of a straw , he delayed the time , so the market closed . There , he can not lead the day to buy shose . Can be thought , A foolish behavior is then a lack of intellect.
In addion , the expression in the last part of the story out of the whole truth . Religion and the diffculties we face different, do not adhere to solution , it should be from a different perspective to find a better way . A foolish man do not seem as stupid . Sometime we're got to think about things in a different way 'think outside the box' and adjust our plans or actions a cordingly.

=> I think you should change it into the following as your passage is very messy and don't have a clear idea towards the story

I think the ending part of the story " A Foolish Man Buy Shoes" is the most interesting part of the whole. Even when the man has his own feet as sample size, he still rather believe the size of the straw he measured than his own feet. He delayed as he went back home for the straw and the market was closed. So, he couldn't buy himself a pair of shoes. As this foolish act is all soursed from the lack of intellect.
In addition, as the thought was brought out at the end of the story that we can look things from a different perspective but not only believing in on single piece of solution, we need to know how to think out of the box in order to find a better way to solve a problem. As the man is not primarily foolish, if only he can adjust his plans and acting with a different perspective accordingly.


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I think you need to rewrite it. I don't really get what you want to say.

The moral in this Chinese story is :Do not think the Zheng is so stupid. Nonetheless, we all have such a stupid time.