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2011-01-27 4:35 am
i am very pleasant to know you would visit Hong Kong next month. i think it is a good decision. hong kong is a great city for tourism . you can enjoy delicious food around the world, buy well-known brand goods trustingly and watch enthralling night scene....... . let me introduce some scenic sports in hong kong for you.
firstly,i would introduce the amusement and entertainment center in hong kong-Ocean Park . You may take the cable car across the hill top to find some thrill rides . The roller-coaster is the most exciting .you can challenge yourself. There are beautiful gardens and sea animals .you can see dolphins,seals,sharks and different kinds of fish there .The dolphins can jump high and throw balls .you can feed dolphins. i think it is very interesting and it is a seldom opportunity to close to dolphins.If the time allows, you may see divers feeding and playing with sharks in the shark aquarium. At the same time, you can enjoy the excellent performances. i can imagine you thirst for going ocean park at this moment.
besides , hong kong is the diners paradise. in hong kong you can eat the food around world, such as Chinese food , Japanese food , Italian food and Thai food . however i think you should eat the local snack ,for example milk tea and egg tarts .milk tea and egg tarts are very popular in hong kong ,because it is very delicious. i think when you enjoy it ,you should know the advantages.
next, the Peak, you can choose either by bus or tram. There is a big shopping mall there. The things in there are unique, but the prices are kind of expensive. If you go there at night, you get to see a beautiful view of hong kong.
i hope that my introduction is useful for you and you have a amusing trip.when you arrive hong kong ,you should call me. it is because i can take days off and play with you.i am looking forward to your visit.

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2011-01-27 7:23 pm
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I am very pleased to know you would visit Hong Kong next month. I think it is a good decision. Hong Kong is a great city for travelling. You can enjoy delicious food around the world, buy well-known brand goods trustingly and watch enthralling night scene. Let me introduce some scenic spots in Hong Kong to you. First, I would introduce Ocean Park to be the first spot that you must go. You may take the cable car across the hill top to find some thrill rides. The roller-coaster is the exciting. You can experience this amazement yourself. There are beautiful gardens and sea animals. You can see dolphins, seals, sharks and varies types of fish there. The dolphins can jump high and throw balls. You can feed the dolphins too! I think it is very interesting and it is a rare but delightful opportunity to have close interaction with dolphins. If you are lucky, you may see divers feeding and playing with sharks in the shark aquarium. At the same time, you can enjoy the excellent performances exclusively. I think you will be very energetic going to Ocean-Park at this moment.

Besides, Hong Kong is a dining paradise. During the journey in Hong Kong, you can try numerous foods such as Chinese dim sum, Japanese sushi, Italian food and Thai food with lots more for you to discover. However I suggest you to taste some the local snack for example milk tea and egg tarts. Both milk tea and egg tarts are very popular in Hong Kong because they are very delicious. Hence, I guarantee you will be relished on it.

Next, you cannot miss The Peak, you can arrive there either by bus or tram which is built with antique British colonial tradition. Also, there is a big shopping mall. The souvenirs are unique but they are expensive unfortunately. If you go to The Peak at night, you get to see a really splendid, magnificent view of Hong Kong, the spectacular scenery is no other elsewhere you can compare with.

2011-01-27 11:59:26 補充:
For the last part please see 意見

2011-01-27 12:00:01 補充:
I hope my introduction will provide you a general image of Hong Kong and wish you enjoy the voyage in here undoubted. When you arrive to Hong Kong, you should call me as I need to arrange some days off in order to have outings with you. I am looking forward to seeing you.
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2011-01-27 10:20 pm
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2011-01-27 6:47 am
I am very pleasant to know you will visit Hong Kong next month. I think it is a good decision. Hong Kong is a great city for tour. You can enjoy delicious food, shopping at famous brand and watching enthralling night scene....... . let me introduce some scenic sports in Hong Kong for you.
Firstly, I would like to introduce the amusement and entertainment center in Hong Kong - Ocean Park . You may take the cable car across the hill top to find some thrill rides . The roller-coaster is the most exciting .you can challenge yourself. There are beautiful gardens and sea animals .you can see dolphins,seals,sharks and many different kinds of fish.The dolphins can jump very high to hit ball in the middle air, you can feed the dolphins. I think it is very interesting and it is a good opportunity to see the dolphins closely. If the time is allowed, you may watch how the divers feeding and playing with sharks in the shark aquarium. At the same time, you can enjoy the excellent performances. I can imagine you thirst for going ocean park at this moment.
Besides , Hong Kong is a food paradise. You can eat the international food, in Hong Kong, such as Chinese food , Japanese food , Italian food and Thai food..etc . however I think you may like to try the local snack ,for example local English tea and egg tarts .local English tea and egg tarts are very popular in Hong Kong it is because it is very delicious. I think when you enjoy it ,you should know the advantages.
Secondly, the Peak, you may go there by bus or tram either. There have a big shopping mall. You may find many fake unique, but the prices are quite expensive. If we go there at night, we get to see a beautiful view of Hong Kong.
I hope that my introduction is useful for you and you have an amusing trip.when you arrive Hong Kong ,you should call me. it is because I can take a day off and play with you. I am looking forward to heareing from you


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