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As we are human being, we must let our conscience be our best guide when we are facing a problem/difficulty.
There is a difficulty that I need to use my own conscience to solve it. The problem is I don't want to go to school in recent days. As you know that it is so cold in winter time and my home is far away from school and also the bus stop is far from home. Every morning, I feel very cold and I don't want to get out of my bed, I just want to stay in the bed and sleep.
At this moment, my angel and devil will pop up in my head. “Cherry, you must get up. If you don't go to school, you will miss a lot of lessons, your parent will punish you and your teacher will think that you are a bad student”, the sweet angel said. But the evil toned in, “Cherry, don’t worry, you don't go to school just for one day, you won't miss a lot of things. You want to sleep more, right, then go ahead and sleep.
Finally, I get up and I go to school. As I don't want to miss any lessons and I will be in trouble if my parents know that. I start asking myself why I have this idea. I never think of not going to school but why I have this kind of idea - because of the weather conditions. I think I am a bad person. As you are a good student, you must never have such kind of idea. I promise myself I must go to school every day.

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As we are human beings, we must try to guide our conscience when we are facing a question.
There was a question that I need to guide my conscience, which was that I don't want to go to school in the recent days. As you know that it is so cold in the winter time and the place where I homestay there is far away from the school and also the bus stop. Every morning, I feel very cold and I don't want to leave my bed. I just want to stay there and sleep.
At this moment, my angel and devil appeared. "Cherry, you must wake up. If you don't go to school, you will miss a lot of lessons. Your parents will punish you and your teacher will think that you are a bad student." my angel said. But my devil said, "Cherry, don't worry. you're just not going to school for one day, you won't miss a lot of things.You want to sleep more, aren't you? So just sleep."
Finally, I woke up and went to school. As I didn't want to miss any lesson and I would get into trouble if my parents knew that I didn't go to school. I start to think that, I have never had an idea of not going to school, but now I have this idea just beacuse of the weather. I think that I am too bad. Because if you are a student, you should never have these kinds of ideas. Therefore, I promise to myself that I will go to school everyday.


2011-01-24 02:13:43 補充：
第2段第1句:
"There was a question that I needed to guide my conscience"*
sorry : P

2011-01-24 02:15:08 補充：
第2段第2句:
"which was that I didn't want to go to school in the recent days."*
sorry again -v-

2011-01-24 02:20:01 補充：
我索性成篇改過-v- so sorry..
As we are human beings, we must try to guide our conscience when we are facing a question.
There was a question that I needed to guide my conscience, which was that I didn't want to go to school in the recent days.