Urgent ITEFL English Grammar
2011-01-20 7:36 am
1. The following extract is written with poor spelling, grammar and punctuation. Re-write it in correct English without changing the style or order. I born in 1951 in one small vilage when I was six year old I went to the primery school and I enjoyed very much, When I was eleven I have moved to hong kong because my father is worker, so all my life I live in differents countries. After school I was for four years in a business colege, and I got a degree in business addministration. I working for a company that products small computar. Its a good work and I’m very interesting for computar. I want learn english because my farther and I we will start own business soon ……………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………
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2011-01-20 3:32 pm
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I was born in1951 in a small village when I was six year old I went to the primaryschool and I enjoyed it very much, When I waseleven I have moved to Hong Kong becausemy father is a worker, so all my life has lived in different countries. Afterschool I have attended for four years in a business college, and I got a degree in business administration. I am working for a company thatproducing small computers. It is agood job and I’m very interesting in computer.I want to learn English because my farther and I we will start our own business soon. 
2011-01-26 11:26 pm
You might want to proofread again what you wrote because some obvious mistakes did not catch your eyes. Regards,
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