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My favourite cartoon is called Doraemon. It is a very popular cartoon in Japan. I like it very much. The main character of this cartoon is Doraemon. He has a circle head and a circle body. His body is blue and the nose is red. There is has a pocket on his tummy. He wears a small bell on his neck. He is 129.3cm tall and, 129 .3kg in weightweight. Doraemon was born on in 3th September 2112. His He’s favourite food is Dorayaki. It is a type of Japanese confection. The other food that he likes to eat is New Year cake. Doraemon hates the mouse mice and he is afraid of them too!. While he was in 2112, a mouse ate his ears. ThereforeSince that, he was scared of mouse. Doraemon has a lot of magic instrumentsthings. They were made in from 2112. They have a lot of functionscan do a lot of things. , for example they cCan fly in the sky, and go to everywhere. In At the story, he gets to a boy's home by a magic machine. The boy's name is Daxiong and they ha ve become become good friends. Daxiong always need s to face lots of meets problems. Doraemon helps him every time. With the help of Doraemon, Daxiong is capable to overcome difficult taskscome over the difficult things well.

Doraemon is a very lovely person and he always makes me very joyful and delightfulhappy.

2011-01-16 19:14:42 補充：
Blue words are the corrections.

Red words are those which are grammatically wrong.

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