i found this really wordy, but i don't know how to edit it to make it less wordy, yet won't lose the message that i'm trying say
Although I already maintain some management and leadership skills that I have gained from previous experiences which fit this program’s expectation for its students: creative, talented individuals who are natural leaders, the features in this program of interactions with classmates and professors through case studies, group work, simulations, and real-world projects would foster my leadership and co-operative skills in a most engaging way by organizing and coaching team members through the assignments.
Edit this for me please? just one sentence?
2011-01-09 11:31 pm
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2011-01-09 11:32 pm
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Although I already maintain some management and leadership skills that I have gained from previous experiences which fit this program’s expectation for its students: creative, talented individuals who are natural leaders, the features in this program of interactions with classmates and professors through case studies, group work, simulations, and real-world projects would foster my leadership and co-operative skills in a most engaging way by organizing and coaching team members through the assignments.
參考: I copied that to edit it and gave up. You need to rewrite it to be simple and make sense to the reader.
2011-01-10 7:46 am
Previous experience has given me some management and leadership skills which fit this program’s expectation for its students. I am a creative, talented individual and am a natural leader. This program would foster my leadership and co-operative skills effectively through organizing and coaching team members with their assignments, case studies, group work, simulations, real-world projects and also through interactions with classmates and professors.
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