(中一) 英文作文!!! 急!!! 15點

A Trip with My Family



I spent a great day with my families in Sai Kung. The trip was held on a sunny and beautiful Sunday. We had barbeque in the harbors, where we were fascinated by the marvelous sea view. Also, we played ball games with my cousins. Although they are all skilled, I co-operate with my sisters and beat them down. Lastly, we feast in the seafood restaurant in Sai Kung. Indeed, it is an unforgettable day trip.

















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你可以選擇
1.經驗
( 如果係very meaningful 如 參觀expo, 長城一遊果d-- 應注重你得到的體會)

2.虛構
六何-- 時,地,人,為何,如何,結果
(不要太誇張則可)
(holiday;country park;picnic;sunny day;ball games;enjoy--with my family)


建議你寫的時候用point form , 記下六何~
事前找related vocab.
到時自由發揮,5洗怕5記得有咩字可用/

如果5想自由發揮, 寫好d稿, 讀5次, 背3次
5好比壓力自己, 記好內容 就可以~ 如果某d vocab.真的很重要, 讀多幾次

At last, presentation is not very difficult(slow down the speed is okay)
不是叫你拖慢每隻字,但段落之間/重要的轉折可停頓 1,2秒
除了令audience更想得知下文,也使自己想一想接下來要說的話

Most students speak very fast because they are afraid
Actually, it won't help. It even makes the whole thing worse
講得快, 可能講5夠時間, 也令自己十分緊張

so--slow down the speed