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Dear Lucy, I am glad to learn about you have won a majorsinging competition.I think you deserved to won the award that I remember yousang very well when you had a singing test in the music lesson and all of ourclassmates praised you for your agreeable voice.Well,I know you are facing aproblem that you need to accept either the place as a police cadet or arecording contract.Being your good friend,I am willing to give you some advice. To begin with, I sympathize with the problemyou are having and I know that it is hard for you to accept either the place asa police cadet or a recording contract.I would say you are such a courageousand righteous girl that you will not look on in silence if you see some unfairand ruthless things happen in the society.Besides,you also a girl who is keenon singing.Therefore,you are uncertain which career is suitable for you. If I were you,I‘d rather be a policewomanbecause this career is really challenging.Although it is sometimesdangerous,you can chase the thief and you have the right to arrest thecriminal.Well,to tell you the truth,I actually regard the policewoman as a herobecause the policewoman saves many victims at the risk of her own.Also,thepolicewoman helps people to resolve their conflicts with others.Ask yourself ifyou like to get gratification after you have helped some needy.It would be ashame to let go of this invaluable change for you as I think you are fullysuitable for this career.Do you want to help the needy in the society?Do youwant there are less people who come into conflict with others and less ruthlessthings happen in the society?If the answer to the above questions is yes,youshould accept the place as a police cadet.