On the first day,my family and I went to the ocean park.We arrived early in the morning.When we bought ticket,we saw many people were playing and eating.We took photo with cartoon doll.They were very cute.In the afternoon,we have lunch and road on a cable car.A lot of trees under we.We were very excited!
In the afternoon,we have lunch and road on a cable car.我想問可唔可以we were have lunch?
On the second day,we went to the Peak in the evening.We road on a Peak cable car to the Peak.It was very interesting!When we arrived on the Peak,the sun set.We saw a view of Hong Kong.It was very beautiful!We were happy!
On this two days,we are happy and exciting!
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Ocean Park是專有名詞!!!!!!!!要用大街 如果我錯既話,你help我改下,唔該!
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THX! On this two days,we are happy and exciting!點解要用過去式? 你有沒msn?thx!thx!thx!
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我選你做最佳!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[email protected] 名是 廣輝
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cartoon doll要唔要加s?
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我現在讀小6D英文都咁屎~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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唔該留低你地既msn~;~