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2010-12-31 7:06 am
I had see other the same type film,for example <<Percy Jackson & the Olympians: TheLightning Thief>>.The film actor is Chris Columbus too.I think thisfilm very similar with <<Harry Potter and the Philosopher Stone>>.The main characteris Percy Jackson,he is the son of god,he need to find the lightning fire tostop god war,for this ,he has overcome many difficulties,like Harry.The film havemany advanced computer stunts too. The only not similarity <<HarryPotter and thePhilosopher Stone>>is talk about magic,the <<Percy Jackson & the Olympians: TheLightning Thief>>is talk about the God.But the two main characterseventually find lost things and prisoners.
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2011-01-02 10:41 pm
2010-12-31 5:59 pm
I had see other = 看或看過, 但電影或報紙我們不叫看...... 電視/電視叫睇...... 報紙叫讀..... so 在這裡應該用...... watch .... I had watch other ......
2010-12-31 8:08 am
I had seen another same-type film, for example "Percy Jackson & the Olympians: The Lightning Thief". The actor of the film is Chris Columbus too. I think this film is very similar to "Harry Potter and the Philosopher Stone". The main character is Percy Jackson. He is the son of god, and he needs to find the lightning fire to stop god war. For this, he has overcome many difficulties like Harry Potter did. The film has used many advanced computer stunts too. The only different point is that "Harry Potter and the Philosopher Stone" is about magic; "Percy Jackson & the Olympians: The Lightning Thief" is about God. But the two main characters eventually found lost objects and prisoners.
Remarks: Do not put a comma after 'difficulties' and put 'like Harry'. A comma in between imply Harry is an example of a difficulty. The word 'like' used after a comma means 'such as' or 'for example'. The meaning is different from 'like' used not after a comma. So, using a comma is wrong. The sentence has a correct meaning with no comma. 'For this, he has overcome many difficulties like Harry Potter did' is fine. I include 'Potter' to avoid there is a character also named Harry in "Percy Jackson & the Olympians: The Lightning Thief". Writing just Harry in this situation may confuse readers.
Remarks: Do not put a comma after 'difficulties' and put 'like Harry'. A comma in between imply Harry is an example of a difficulty. The word 'like' used after a comma means 'such as' or 'for example'. The meaning is different from 'like' used not after a comma. So, using a comma is wrong. The sentence has a correct meaning with no comma. 'For this, he has overcome many difficulties like Harry Potter did' is fine. I include 'Potter' to avoid there is a character also named Harry in "Percy Jackson & the Olympians: The Lightning Thief". Writing just Harry in this situation may confuse readers.
2010-12-31 7:36 am
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I had seen other films of the same type [ ], for example <<Percy Jackson & the Olympians: TheLightning Thief>>. The [] actor of the film is Chris Columbus too. I think this film very similar to <<Harry Potter and the Philosopher Stone>>. The main character, [] Percy Jackson, who is the son of a god,he need to find the lightning fire to stop a war between the gods, for this ,he has to overcome many difficulties, just like Harry. The film has many advanced computer stunts too. The only dissimilarity about <<HarryPotter and the Philosopher Stone>> is that it talks about magic, whereas []<<Percy Jackson & the Olympians: TheLightning Thief>> talks about the gods. But the two main characters eventually found lost things and prisoners.
In all, it may be better to use all past tense as you're mostly describing the movie.
I had seen other films of the same type [ ], for example <<Percy Jackson & the Olympians: TheLightning Thief>>. The [] actor of the film is Chris Columbus too. I think this film very similar to <<Harry Potter and the Philosopher Stone>>. The main character, [] Percy Jackson, who is the son of a god,he need to find the lightning fire to stop a war between the gods, for this ,he has to overcome many difficulties, just like Harry. The film has many advanced computer stunts too. The only dissimilarity about <<HarryPotter and the Philosopher Stone>> is that it talks about magic, whereas []<<Percy Jackson & the Olympians: TheLightning Thief>> talks about the gods. But the two main characters eventually found lost things and prisoners.
In all, it may be better to use all past tense as you're mostly describing the movie.
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