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You may use the following points to write the essay:

1) Briefly describe the gender, the age, the school level of the shy girl ( I choose it to be a girl for more convincing ).

2) Describe in what senses she us shy, from the normal behaviour in Recess to the questions of teachers to her involvement in PE lessons, etc. If you could, point out some background reason why she is so shy in front of public.

3) Describe how the teachers / classmates help her to improve: For instance, participation in voluntary services like flag-selling, visits to elderly warehouse, librarian, etc.

4) State the positive changes she has after active participation in different service and duties.

I think you can write in 200 words or more using the framework above. Hope I can help you.