Proofreading

As powerful as they are, the Martians are immune to the Earth’s diseases. Man cannot stop them out, but tiny bacteria can kill them. The book has been made into a film. In the film everything happens in America, and some things are dated. But, it is still worth watching. Have a look at it in your video store.

2010-12-29 12:14:02 補充：
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Human (referring to a type) cannot stop them out, but tiny bacteria can kill them.
In the film, everything happens in America and some things are dated.

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As powerful as they are, Martians are immune to Earth's diseases. Man cannot stop them, but tiny bacteria can! A book written by Mr Proofread is now featuring on film. Title :"Everything Happens In America" is a movie not to be missed and worth every $$ to watch.

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