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1. MY idol is Lam Fung. He is a singer.= CORRECT2.That is the Favorite Male Singer that Lam Fung 2010 Hit King Hall of Fame general election music Global Chinese Music A wards and Hit the king Almighty Artist Hall of Fame. ??? DONT UNDERSTAND?3. This is the coach who HAS taught Lam Fung to sing. (SINGING)4. This is the practice singing place where Lam Fung learn to singing- SEE BELOW
This is the place where Lam Fung learns and practises singing.

1. This is Lam Fung. He is a singer

2. In 2010, Lam Fung hit the King Hall of Fame general election music Global Chinese Music A wards and the king Almighty Artist Hall of Fame.3. This is the coach who taught Lam Fung to sing. 4. This is the place where Lam Fung learn and practise his singing.


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5.The toilet brush on the wall is his microphone.

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6. He likes to eat banana.

(lol)

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4. This is the practice singing room where Lam Fung learn singing

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