幫我改英文作文(2)

Jane was a frank, warm, pure,firm and resolute girl. Even if she was very poor, but she would not alwayswallow in degeneration. When she faced the adverse circumstance, she would beface strongly. For example, her aunt was ill and fell on the bed, she did not hold a grudge against and went back to visit her. Although heraunt neglected and abused Jane, when she repented her mistake, Jane excusedher, 她的氣度和修養在此見得(英文不知怎樣寫.)When she has inherited a bigproperty, she did not monopolize and shared it to her cousins. Some people wouldbe poor childhood, when they grow up, they would regard money usually. However,Jane seemed to be like very thin fame andgain. Mr. Rochester also appreciated her and fell in lovewith her. When Mr. Rochester lost the wealth, the status, both eyes and his hand,Jane still did not change the original intention, decided to follow him forever.由於office的能力有限,不能把所有錯誤找出,所以需要大家幫手.我知道自己英文水平不好,我希望大家能就著以下的問題,給予意見和改寫1.中式英文2.文法錯誤3.詞不達意4.時態問題5.用字重複單調(注:英語學習網站及一些無關網站就免, 再有的以檢舉處理)