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My Autobiography My name is Lei Chai-chen. I am 24 years old and I graduated from the National University of Tainan. I came from a cheerful middle class family. I have a younger sister. My father is an operator and my mother is a homemaker(homemaker是什麼?家庭主婦嗎?如果是的話要用housewife). Throughout my life, they had given me a lot of encouragement and support. I was taught to be independent since I was little. During my studies at school, I have joined the Tzu Chi Collegiate Association and participated in many activities. I enjoyed getting involved in varieties of school activities. These activities not only helped me made friends, but also gained helped me gain new valuable experiences. I learned a lot about the spirit of Tzu Chi and the best attitude to face difficulties.My favorite past time hobby is reading. It not only provides me with useful information, but also gives me pleasure. By reading, I am able to place myself in another world where I can travel to any period of time, visit any place, and forget about my worries(parallel structure). I enjoyed reading different kinds of books. Such as adventure stories, traveling books, and articles in magazines. To tell the truth, reading brings me joys and adds more flavors to my tiring and dull school life.
2010-12-11 00:17:55 補充:
他不讓我全部打進去!!
2010-12-11 00:18:50 補充:
I have been playing the violin since I was five. My teachers had taught me many techniques. Therefore, I would like to major in music and be a musician in the future. In my opinion, being a violinist requires much practice because there are many good teachers.(我不懂你這句話在表達什麼?有很多好老師?)
2010-12-11 00:19:12 補充:
我幫你改一下哪整段喔:
A good violinist is required to be sensitive as well as reacting to the music and expressing the feelings behind it. In order for me to learn more about music, a good learning environment and great teachers are needed.
2010-12-11 00:20:48 補充:
I believe I could benefit greatly if I were to have the chance to go to Birmingham School (我不知道是school還是college還是institute). I hope I will have the opportunity to work and to strengthen myself in United Kingdom for a few years after I graduated.
2010-12-11 00:21:02 補充:
When I return to Taiwan, I would love to share my knowledge and guide the students in Taiwan or China. I believe the students can learn from my experiences and so can I learn new things about musics from them.
2010-12-11 00:21:18 補充:
根據我的了解,你要申請學校是嗎?
那我在幫你加一段
Combined with the aforementioned reasons, I believe that I am a good match for Birmingham and it for me. I cannot wait to immerse myself into the exciting and educational campus at Birmingham School!
這樣不知道有沒有幫到你 :D
2010-12-11 00:21:54 補充:
我把他打到意見了