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1. Sports Day is on March 12th.
Sports Day is held on March 12th.
Comment:
There are two mistakes. (Wrong use of the preposition “at” and the verb “happen”)
Sports Day does not happen on that particular date. It is planned and decided by the school committee.
2. My mother and I went shopping yesterday.
3. Sam didn't get into the water because he didn't know how to swim.
Comment:
You may know all about swimming, but you don't know how to swim.
4. I am in the sixth form (or form 6) this year and I want to further my studies overseas.
Better:
I am in the sixth form this year and I want to pursue further studies overseas.
Comment:
Sixth form is the two final years at school in Britain for students between the age 16 and 18 who are preparing to take advanced level examination. No need to mention the word “study” in the first clause.
To refer to the work that a student does at a college or university, use "studies". After form 6, you obviously want to go to university.
5. I like listening to pop music.
6. He was successful in the examination.