英文自我介紹10句

Good morning ( afternoon) everybody! My name is Miffy.
I am twenty-seven years old.
I was born in Hsinchu.
My family consists of five members. I have parents and two little sisters.My father is a businessman and my mother is a nurse.My sisters are studying in the XXX University.
Now I am studing in " Industrial Engineering and Management ".I am shy when I meet a stranger. However I shall be active if we get acquainted.
My hobbies are listening music, playing computer-games and shopping.However, I like shopping most.
I wish one day I would be a businesswoman, the owner of a boutique in future. Finally, thank you for your attention.

hello~good morning/afternoon ,everyone
My name is Miffy.
I was born in Hsinchu.(Where do you born in?)
I have five person in my family.(My family are so nice to me)
I like listening music (such as ...........)(because it cam make me relaxed)
(I also like playing computer games and taking with friends on computer)
My department is Industrial Engineering and Management.
然後講下你 關於工業工程與管理的工作.
thank you~

以上係我的提議.隨便你用唔用0.0
P.S.有( )的字句係我提議的.3.

hello everyone, today i want to share with you somethins about myself. my name is call Miffy. I was born in Hsinchu. My family members for a total of 5, 可以講埋自己係第幾個女。my hobby is listening to music and playing computer. and now, i am studing "Industrial Engineering and Management".Hope that through this self-introduction, everybody can know more about me. thank you for your listeing. bye bye.

1.你的夢想是.......(做什麼job)
2.how old are you?
3.how do you come to school?
4. 你喜歡去什麼地方?(park?)
5.你有多少兄弟姐妹?


開頭最好唔用hello everyone or hello everybody,好像有d怪..........