急cheak gammer &可以講比我聽點解錯嗎? PLS

2010-11-26 8:43 am
Firstly, in Hong Kong many mass media will debase the mela.The television advertisement of ‘Tempo’ is show the character has some crazy behavior such as he keeps the paper towel had use by the lader and kiss this paper towel . (Baby John,2008)I think this advertisement show the man has terrible habit will be destroy image of the male. Also,some television shows only invite the woman guest and they are the judge, for example, Mr. Hong Kong(Miss Ho,2009),on the contrary, Miss. Hong Kong can invite anyone to come.So Mr Hong Kong is unfair to male. Do you know this day, the 8th of March? This is the International Women's Day. It is a major day of global celebration of women. According to the newspaper, Ngong Ping 360 Company provides free rides on cable cars for the first 3,800 female passengers on this particular day. (An editor by The Sun, 2010) How about the men’s rights? Do they become less important in Hong Kong ? In fact, men make many contributions for our society but we take it for granted.

回答 (2)

2010-11-26 7:33 pm
Grammatically speaking, only one sentence is correct:
In fact, men make many contributions for our society but we take it for granted.
Sorry to say most of the paragraph require fixing and it will be hard to do it here and give you every explanation becuase most involve the way you think and how to translate your thoughts into words.

Seek an Englihsh Tutor or ask a friend/senior student with good Enlgish go write with you to correct your thoughts, not just writing.
2010-11-26 2:38 pm
Everything is wrong here. Try : learn some grammar, check the dictionary for correct spelling and construct short simple sentences for a start, if you're serious about learning English.



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