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1. Some thoughts come in my mind. ---wrong wordSome thoughts came to my mind. ORSome thoughts came into my mind.
2. I heard a good new. ---articleI heard the good news.
3. I pass the interview. ---wrong wordI passed the interview.
4. I fail the interview. ---wrong wordI failed the interview.
5. I might still have the chance. ---articleI might still have a chance.
6. Don't put yourself too much stress because stress can affect performance enormously. ---wrong wordDon't putting yourself too much stress because stress can affect performance enormously. (“enormously” correct)
7. It was a treasurable opportunity. ---wrong word (我想表達"這是一次難得的機會")(“Treasonable” is not really wrong)It was a rare opportunity.8. in the ferry ---prepositionon the ferry
9. Everything was calm and quiet, the sea was peaceful and the waves were moderate. ---run on (如果中間加個and的話,整個句子怕唔怕太多and?)Everything was calm and quiet. The sea was peaceful and the waves were moderate.10. We bought some snacks and drinks. ---articleCorrect.
11. It was even worse in the next day morning. ---too many words, some are unneccessayIt was even worse the next day morning.
12. Almost fifty people stayed at the terminal. ---prepositionAlmost fifty people stayed in the terminal.
13. It was the first time that I visited a theme park and also the first time that got stranded. ---sentence structure It was my first visit to the theme park and also the first time got stranded.14. "模擬面試"Mock interview
2010-11-17 18:18:15 補充：
以最嚴格的語言邏輯來批判，interview本身是不會pass或fail的。而然我們每用此結構之時，句子自含有「是否成功被取錄」（be enrolled）或「獲取某資格」（be qualified）之意，則無不可。
例如：You've Passed the First and Second Round of Interviews. But Why Didn't You Get the Job?你已通過了第一及第二階段的面試，然而為個你沒有被取錄？
又例如：Seven reasons why people fail in interviews. 七個面試失敗的原因。
2010-11-18 11:31:21 補充：
假設interview沒有pass或fail之別。卻又一定要用其他字來替代pass同fail（即含有pass同fail之意思而又不是此兩個字），同時保留interview這個字，邏輯上成立嗎？
我建議如下：
I was successful at the interview.
I was unsuccessful at the interview.
2010-11-18 11:36:20 補充：
同樣，你老師或會說interview沒有success或不success，不過我仍是這樣解說：成功與否不是形容interview本身，而是說面試者是否成功被取錄／成功考獲某資格的狀態。
2010-11-18 14:39:12 補充：
「我老師話interview唔可以用pass同fail來形容的」
再簡單點，“interview”也有好幾種，如job interview、TV interview、career interview、casual interview…那些有pass／fail之分，那些沒有，火火你能分得出嗎？千萬不要一本通書睇到老。
