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2010-11-08 6:52 pm
The rear entrance should be used mainly for flow of raw materials.
Putting goods there for a prolong period of time will cause to hinder the operation.
I attention that some items was reserved for department a month already.
太約情況如下:
有些東西預留比某部門已經一個月,如長期擺放,會影響日常運作。所以想叫他拿走。
幫我睇下我咁寫得唔得= ="

回答 (3)

2010-11-08 10:37 pm
✔ 最佳答案
If you're writing a notice to serve as a warning to everyone, here is an example :

Notice :

Please do not leave goods permanently/more than 2 weeks at the rear entrance of the office. Note that this door is reserved for periodical transfering of raw materials for all departments, and any obstruction to the pathway may caused great inconvenience to whomever that might be concern.

Thank you for your cooperation

From the mangagement staff
Miss xxx
2010-11-08 11:20 pm
Ther rear entrance should be kept clear for movement of materials. I've notices that some (or XXX) department have/has some items stock in that area for over a month. Please make every effort to remove the items as soon as possible to avoid interference with normal daily operations.
2010-11-08 8:27 pm
The rear entrance is mainly use for flow of raw materials.
Putting things there for a long period of time will affect the company's daily operation.
I 've noticed that the things there, are the ones that were reserved for department a month ago.
參考: me


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