IELTS 改文 writing 20分

2010-11-07 4:04 am
Task 2

Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Nowadays, there are advertisements everywhere, you will find advertising for various kinds of goods in the newspapers, magazines, and even on the public transports like taxies, MTR and buses. In fact, the impact of advertisements is huge and it always is a emphasized factor for customers to decide whether buy the goods or not. I have to say that it is an effective method to persuade customers for spending money, no matter the goods is essential or not.
First of all, advertisings are one of the marketing strategies for businessmen to run the business and increase the income. They try to show all of the advantages of their products or the reasonable price of those through the advertisements, with an attempt to promote their products. For instance, most of the fashion brand companies would hire the local or international celebrities for promoting the dressing, because of the popularity of those celebrities. The products always become well-known in a short period. As a result, more people purchase those products and the sales will rose.
Apart from that, customers could buy goods due to the popularity of the products, not the needs. Ipod touch is one of the common products for this. In recent years, most citizens have brought a cell phone which includes music player, however, they probably brought the Ipod touch for listening music under the effect of advertisements. Actually, this is a trend and it is not necessary for them.
In conclusion, the advertisements have an incredible effect on promotion of goods and turn the goods to more attractive one to the consumers, therefore, the sales are rose dramatically for all products .


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更新1:

Taks 1 The given graph and table reveal the global water use by sector and water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000 respectively.

更新2:

The information is given by the graph shows that both industrial and domestic use of water were negligible in the early 19th century. However, the capacity of water used in agriculture gradually increased from 500 Km3 to 1000 Km3 in the same period.

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After that, the water consumption in agriculture rose dramatically to 3000 Km3 in 2000. On the hand, those for industrial and domestic use soared in a higher rate to 1000 Km3 and 400 Km3 respectively.

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The remaining table shows the population of Brazil in 2000 was 176 million, it was much higher than Conga which was 5.2 million. Moreover, the irrigated land of Congo is 100 Km2, there were 265 times more for Brazil.

更新5:

In the water consumption, it shows the similar trend to the population that 359 m3 per person in Brazil and merely 8 m3 in Congo.

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2010-11-11 10:56 pm
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