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To encourage student learn English in an effective way, In order to encourage English learning among students and to promote the more effective ways to learn English, Chu Hai College had invited Mr Victor Fung, a senior English newspaper editor, to hold a presentation of as our seminar speaker for English Enhancement Program on 13 October 2010.

There are were three key points in the talk. Firstly, to make it a habit to to make watching English comics, TV news channels or listening to the radio news programs your habits. Rote learning by rote is the discouraged was not encouraged. so you need to put Instead, he recommended the association and usage of English in contexts and real scenarios. and use it associations.

Secondly, to create an environment and develop your passion. For example, students can always go to the library to should always borrow English storybooks from library. Thirdly, you can to speak in English to your friends and teachers in public. "It was is the most difficult part to speak out, but you need have to conquer your fear and get started today.” Mr Fung said.

2010-11-04 12:00:35 補充：
講座於2010年10月13日，自必然是past tense

001已經答晒grammar，但係有些你的寫法也不是太錯的：

Chu Hai College invited a senior English newspaper editor, Mr Victor Fung, to hold a presentation on English Enhancement on 13 October 2010.

如果English Enhancement是個名稱便要用大寫。

Firstly, to make it a habit to watch English comics, news channel or listen to the radio news programs.這句沒有主詞，所以只是一句fragment.另外你說三樣key point,應該
1. making a habit to...x y z.
2. creating an environment or developing a passion...
3. speaking English publicly
是否這三樣？

你寫出時要三樣用同一寫法，例如以上全用gerund來作句，不要一時用to xxx, 一時又用xing。

當列出時
Firstly,
Secondly,
Thirdly,
是要分三段的。