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謝謝你愛用本公司的產品,你在8/2/2010所訂購的xxx產品,其製造日期為06/2010,有效期限為06/2012.Thank you for loving our product. The manufacture date for the xxx product purchased on 8/2/2010 is 06/2010 and its expiry date is 06/2010. LifeLaw Team

To: 李∮玲 知識長
您的句子: The item you brought on 2 Aug 2010 with the manufacturing date of Jun 2010 and the expiry date of Jun 2012.

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Thanks you for using our products. The item you brought on 2 Aug 2010 with the manufacturing date of Jun 2010 and the expiry date of Jun 2012.

Thanks for your loyalty in using our products. The manufacturing date for the item that you brought on 2 Aug 2010 was Jun 2010 & the expiry date will be Jun 2012.