英文文法有無錯?

I have recevied your order , which will be passed onto production.

I have recevied your order = this part is correct

and will be processed it. = and I will be processed ...X wrong

and it will be in production soon. = correct.

I have recevied your order and it will be in production = correct

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Thank you for your order. It will be processed right away.

2010-11-02 22:29:49 補充：
How come you guys do not say 'thank you' after receiving an order? When you say 'thank you' for the order, it implies receiving the order. If you want to make it a formal way of confirming receipt, it should be 'We acknowledge receipt of your order for ........".

I have recevied your order and will be processed it.

這句句子可分為兩部份:
I have received your order. I will be processed it.

前者: I have received your order.
這句正確。

後者: I will be processed it.
這句錯了。
這句句子中process是處理的意思，be processed是被處理的意思。當然，要處理的是order而不是I，所以這句文法錯了。

正確的寫法是I will process it.或It will be processed.

全句的正確寫法是: I have received your order and will process it.或I have received your order and it will be processed.

2010-11-03 11:25:22 補充：
That is because the question concerns only about grammatical mistake, instead of how to write a business formal letter.