括弧裏面的字應該是錯的,但我不知道如何改...還有如果有其他錯誤,也幫我修正下^^
Dear Peter,
HI,Peter.How are you?Last weekend,I went hiking with my friends.Let me tell you about the day.
At last weekend,we went hiking in Mui Wo.First,we (have take) a ferry to Mui Wo.Then,we (walks) for a long time.We came to pui O ofter 3 hours.We (are) happy and (helpful).After that,we (have) lunch.I (eat) lot's of chicken wings and pizza,It (is) yummy.Finally,we (walk) along the beach and (pick) up ( ) shells.We (play) volleyball and (swimming). At night,we (buy) a lot of things and (go) home by bus.
(That are my last weekend day),Do you like it?
Your friend
Chris
英文作文改正（簡單）English
2010-11-02 1:27 am
回答 (2)
2010-11-02 11:46 pm
(have take) -> took [simple past tense]
(walks) -> walked [simple past tense]
(are) -> were [simple past tense]
(helpful) -> 你寫helpful是甚麼意思？helpful意思是好幫手。跟happy或你們的心情和狀態都唔相配的形容詞。
(have) -> had [simple past tense]
(eat) -> ate [simple past tense]
(is) -> was [simple past tense] =>這句用it其實也錯，應該用they were yummy. they是雞翼和pizza兩樣嘢眾數。
(walk) -> walked [simple past tense]
(pick) -> picked [simple past tense]
(play) -> played [simple past tense]
(swimming) -> swam / went swimming [simple past tense]
(buy) -> bought [simple past tense]
(go) -> went [simple past tense]
(That are my last weekend day) -> This was my last weekend [this + simple past tense表示你的講詞／文章在此「這裏」 - 不是在「那裏」，day是多餘的字。]
簡單而言，你在報告上周的事，所以全用simple past tense寫才對。
(walks) -> walked [simple past tense]
(are) -> were [simple past tense]
(helpful) -> 你寫helpful是甚麼意思？helpful意思是好幫手。跟happy或你們的心情和狀態都唔相配的形容詞。
(have) -> had [simple past tense]
(eat) -> ate [simple past tense]
(is) -> was [simple past tense] =>這句用it其實也錯，應該用they were yummy. they是雞翼和pizza兩樣嘢眾數。
(walk) -> walked [simple past tense]
(pick) -> picked [simple past tense]
(play) -> played [simple past tense]
(swimming) -> swam / went swimming [simple past tense]
(buy) -> bought [simple past tense]
(go) -> went [simple past tense]
(That are my last weekend day) -> This was my last weekend [this + simple past tense表示你的講詞／文章在此「這裏」 - 不是在「那裏」，day是多餘的字。]
簡單而言，你在報告上周的事，所以全用simple past tense寫才對。
2010-11-02 1:35 am
took
walked
were
???
had
ate
was
walked
picked
some
played
swam
bought
went / returned
here is what i have done in the last weekend
唔知岩唔岩, 有錯請指教.
walked
were
???
had
ate
was
walked
picked
some
played
swam
bought
went / returned
here is what i have done in the last weekend
唔知岩唔岩, 有錯請指教.
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