With a honourable and experienced duty, the respoinsible and fidelity workers______(name of the worker) deserved a promote to ______(position after promotion) with an appropriate adjustment of salary.
Sorry, but I've to say that your opinion is unacceptable. To promote somebody to a more advance position, it's depends on a person's skill and ability which are required in his / her future position.
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You should review his / her performance whether there are sufficient evidences for whom to get a promotion.
He/She has demonstrated abitites and skills exceeded the requirements of the current position and delivered exceptional productivity and results.
以上係暗示,如果要寫明建議升職加薪,可加上
It is recommended to consider a promotion to the position of XXXX in the coming year with approporiate salary rise.