請英文高手幫我修改一下這句英文文法

I would like to share with all of you the pencil case which I always carry as it reminds me of my best friend, Afra.


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I always bring along with me the pencil case that Afra give me & share it with all of you. This can remind me never to forget our friendship.

I want to share the pencil case with all of you, because this is something I always carry around and it reminds me my friendship with Afra forever.



remind 要加s @@|| 很多人沒加呀

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I share the pencil box to you(你們, 講話時通常說這樣就夠了.足以代表大家) because I always carry it with me, and it can remind me that Afra is my best friend forever.

2010-10-22 17:12:51 補充：
個人不會覺得家want比較好. 除非這是你的第一句
但通常開頭都是,大家好,今天我想要介紹這個鉛筆盒
再下來才是進一步解釋為何你想要介紹這個鉛筆盒
而從你中文意思來說,我會選擇不加want
如果不是很正式的演講
我覺得I would like to 就太正式了
通常有趣活潑的演講不需要如此拘泥..
發完文後發面已有很類似的回答
稱霸天下的回答很不錯喔!!

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I want to share the pencil case with all of you because this is something I always carry with and that also remind myself that Afra is a forever friend of mine.

I want to share with all of you this pencil case which I always carry with to remind me that Afra is a forever friend of mine.

I want to share the pencil case with all of you because I always carry it with me and it can remind me that Afra is my best friend forever.(我想與大家分享這個鉛筆盒，因為我總是隨身攜帶，它可以提醒我 Afra 永遠是我最好的朋友。)

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notice改成Remind
Afra 後面不要is , 改用--- ,不然就是要用who is