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2010-10-21 8:27 am
Aliens 2 is one of the best films that I have ever seen.It's a science fiction horror film. It is a sequel of Alien. The director of the Aliens 2 is James Cameron. Aliens 2 is a long film, about 137 mintues.
The film is set in the heavenly bodies LV-426 in 2179.The story is about Ellen Ripley(leading actress)who came back to the Earth by Narcissus spaceship. She told to somebody about aliens, but no one belived that. Then, she went to LV-426 by spaceship with a team in a chance. In here, they had a lot of danger and killed by aliens. Finally, only she, Newt, Bishop and Hicks(leading actor) could went back to the Earth.
It's a old and famous film. The film content and scenes are very terrific and add excitement. Some scenes will make you feel horrible.The film special and action scenes done by computer specials look very real.You can't believe that it made by computer. My favourite part of the film is the aliens to make a surprise attack on the leading actress and Newt. Some aliens look likes spider. The aliens clamb and wanted to eat them. They almost died. Suddenly, the leading actor helped them and killed the aliens. I like this scene a lot because I thought they would die in that time and I feel so horrible because they walked as a spider.I think that they look terrific.
I think the leading actor, leading actress, Bishop and Newt were very excellent. In the film, only they could go back to the Earth. Other people died in the LV-426.It’s a sad ending. Aliens 2 is unpredictable.Aliens 2 had a sequel. It’s Aliens 3.
I think Aliens 2 is a great movie that suitable for teenagers and adults.I hope you will love this film.

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2010-10-21 9:00 am
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Aliens 2 was one of the best films that I have ever seen. It was a science fiction horror film. It was a story of a sequel of Alien. The director of the Aliens 2 was James Cameron. Aliens 2 was a long film. It was about 137 minutes.

This film happened in the heavenly bodies LV-426 in 2179.The story started after Ellen Ripley (leading actress) had come back to the Earth by Narcissus spaceship. She told people about the aliens, but no one believed that. Then, she went back to LV-426 with her own team. Over there, they encountered a lot of dangers and some even got killed by aliens. Finally, only Newt, Bishop, Hicks (leading actor) and she could go back to the Earth.

It's was a well-known classic film. The content and scenes of the film were very terrific. Some of the special effects were done by computer. So it looked very real and you would not even recognize it. My favourite part of the film was the aliens making a surprise attack on the Ripley and Newt. The spider-alike aliens wanted to eat them and they almost died. But Ripley fough back and killed them all. I liked this scene a lot because I thought they would die in that time and I felt so horrible because they walked like a spider.

I think Ripley, Bishop and Newt had done a very excellent job. Since they were the only people could go back to the Earth. All others had died in the LV-426. It was a sad ending. Aliens 2 had a sequel. It was Aliens 3. I think Aliens 2 was a great movie that suitable for teenagers and adults. I hope you will enjoy and love this film.

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2010-10-21 8:33 am
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