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On 2nd September, my school held a swimming gala at Sha Tin Jockey Club Public Swimming Pool. It was quite far away from my home and therefore I went there by minibus. I was not alone and I went with my best friend Brian Leung. Before the competition started, there was a flag-raising ceremony. After that, the competition began. When the competition was going along, there was a man diving in another pool, his action was very funny and everyone was laughing when they saw that. Everyone in the competition made an effort to order to get a good result. Finally, the swimming gala ended and my house, B house was the second runner-up. Congratulation! I and my friends both had a great time and I enjoyed it so much.
On 9th October, I had a Boy Scout first meeting. When it started, the leader splitted the people into several gropus. I was in the lion team and Brian Leung was in the dog team. Our leader then did an introduction to Boy Scout and the awards. After that, we had a game to help us learn each members ’name.
On 12th October, I had a Robotic Technic Club meeting with Brian Leung and Toby Yeung in computer room. We learnt about the basic thing about Nxt 2.0 and the three major competition of robot. It was very interesting and we did learn a lot!