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(我係f.4)
1. I’m really glad to see you enjoy your new school life. Let’s me share mine too!2. I am the second year student of the New Senior Secondary curriculum.3. Since I have become a senior student, I have various changes of my living habits.4. I always sleep at midnight and feel tired the day after to. So bad for me!5. It was so great that we don’t have any lessons for a week.6. I am really excited and expect to it.7. I am going to Ocean Park for the ‘Thematic Picnics’.8. The element that I like least……9. My head always ache when I do Chinese homework.10. I have to study really hard of it.
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2010-10-14 4:55 am
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2010-10-14 6:02 am
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1. I’m really glad to see you enjoy your new school life. Let me share mine too! [Let's 是let us的縮寫，這裏是let me不是let us we.]2. I am a second year student of the New Senior Secondary curriculum. [你是眾多新學制的學生的其中一個a student，不是唯一的the student]3. Since I have become a senior student, I have various changes to my living habits.4. I always sleep by midnight and feel tired the day after. So bad for me! [一般用by來指某時間前或在某時間左右，at是規定的一點時間，你不可能每天都準時00:00:00睡著吧。不知那個to是甚麼用意，沒有它反而已經正確。the day after是正確表逹某事情之後的第二天]5. It was so great that we don’t have any lessons for a week. [ok]6. I am really excited and expecting it.[唔肯定你用expect的意思 ，但expect to it是錯的句法，expecting是因為跟前一樣I am expecting it...預期發生或遇到]7. I am going to Ocean Park for the ‘Thematic Picnics’. [ok] 8. The element that I least like is ……[英文句法是這樣：以least形容like的程度，所以放在它前面]9. My head always aches when I do Chinese homework. [第三身單數head的動詞加s]10. I have to study really hard for it. [for為了這it我要非常努力，of意思是附屬的preposition-of it意思是「it的」] 
2010-10-14 5:55 am
You should improve your English grammer.
Allthough i am a F3 student,I still find some mistakes on above sentences.
2010-10-13 22:02:10 補充：
I am a second year student of the New Senior Secondary curriculum.
I always headache while I am doing/finishing my Chinese homework
. I am studying hard of it.(It is a plan,so we use present continuous)
I have ensured above sentences had some mistakes.
2010-10-13 22:02:44 補充：
I always get a headache while I am doing/finishing my Chinese homework
Allthough i am a F3 student,I still find some mistakes on above sentences.
2010-10-13 22:02:10 補充：
I am a second year student of the New Senior Secondary curriculum.
I always headache while I am doing/finishing my Chinese homework
. I am studying hard of it.(It is a plan,so we use present continuous)
I have ensured above sentences had some mistakes.
2010-10-13 22:02:44 補充：
I always get a headache while I am doing/finishing my Chinese homework
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