急!!!幫我改改我ge英文寫作... 唔該...

2010-10-02 2:42 am

急!! 兩日要交..
幫下手..
I feel happy in my new school. It is because I meet many schoolmates in
there. It is a lot of fun. Besides, I can also learn many other subjects things. It is
amazing too.
Moreover, I like having a lunch with my friends at outside. Because I usually
have a lunch alone in my primany school. After lunch, my friend and i
also like going to school library reading books together .Because we also like
reading novel .

仲有一段架... 但個段我想自己試下改~
唔該曬..
*註:如果可以,可以同我用紅字顯示我錯左係邊嗎?
等我可以知道錯左係邊ma ~
>W <''
THZ ``

回答 (1)

goldrabbit368

2010-10-07 12:56 am

✔ 最佳答案

I feel happy to study in my new school because I meet many schoolmates there.
Besides there is a lot of fun, I can also learn many other subjects which are very amazing in my school.
I like having a lunch with my friends outside our school but I usually have a lunch alone in our primany school.
After lunch, my friend and I like reading books in school library together because we like reading novels .

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