Self-introduction﹝請幫忙修改文法等，唔該﹞

希望你喜歡我的修改:

Hello, everyone.

My name is Renee.
I'm from Taipei.
I like learning Cantonese and Japanese. I also like facebook and movies.
My favorite artist is Sammi Cheng (鄭秀文). She is my idol. I have been her faithful fan for more than ten years. I have been to her concerts at Hong Kong coliseum and Taipei Arena.

When I'm in Hong Kong, I love to transport by trams. I enjoy the Victoria view, local food, shopping and much more. That's why I love Hong Kong so much.

I look forward to visiting Hong Kong soon. If possible, I would like to work in Hong Kong in future.

Finally, ﹝拿出海報﹞ here is a poster for you to see.
Have you seen this movie before? The name of this movie is "Totoro" .
This is a very good movie which has brought back much memories of those good old days, espeically when I was a child. This is my recommendation to you. I hope you like it.

Thank you for your listening.

2010-09-30 20:06:11 補充：
最後一句, 應該是 Thank you.

2010-10-01 10:34:34 補充：
一個台北人國立大學畢業至香港工搵份工，難嗎?

除非你有特別門路或專長, 能進入跨國大機構, 否則是絕對不容易的. 個人覺得現在比較容易進入的是娛樂事業, 如音樂, 化妝, 電視甚至賭場等. 在香港, 我幾乎覺得已由大陸人雄霸了大部份行業及職位.

It is well-written. 如這篇英文文章都有錯, 也許是看錯了!

除了串錯了「espeically」之外，我就認為十分好了！