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2010-09-25 7:33 am
Facebook is a social networking website launched in 2004 thats operated and privately owned by Fb, Inc.with more than 500 million active user in 2010 which about one person for every fourteen in the world. Users can add people as friends and send them messages, update their personal profiles to notify friends about themselves. Additionally, users can join networks organized by workplace, school, college. The websites name stems from the colloquial name of books given to students at the start of the academic year by university administrations in the US with the intention of helping students to get to know each other better. Fb allows anyone who declares themselves to be aged 13 or older to become a member of the website.
Fb was founded by Mark with his roommates and fellow computer science students Ed, Du and Ch . The websites membership was initially limited by the founders to Harvard students, but was expanded to other colleges in the Boston area, the Ivy League,and Sf University.It gradually added support for students at various other universities before opening to high school students, finally, to anyone aged 13 and over.
Fb has met with some controversy. It has been block intermittently in several countrie including Pakistan, Syria, China,Vietnam, Iran, North Korea. It has also been banned at many place of work to discourage employee from wasting time using the service. Fb's privacy has also been an issue, the safety of their users has been compromised several time. Fb settled a lawsuit regarding claims over source code and intellectual property. The site has also been involved in controversy over the sale of fans and friends.
2009 Compete.com study ranked Fb as the most used social network by worldwide monthly active users, followed by MySpace.Entertainment Weekly put it on its end-of-the-decade 'best-of' list, saying, How on earth did we stalk our exes, remember our co-workers birthday, bug our friends, and play a rousing game of Scrabulous before Fb?

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2010-09-26 12:28 pm
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This looks like homework. I can help you but would like you to put in the effort in order to get the benefit of the exercise.

I have inserted numbers [1] to [5] in the original sentences (I have omitted words within the sentences due to size restrictions), to classifiy the content into the following 5 groups. You would now need to summarize each group into one sentence.

[1.] What is face book ? What doe it do?
[2 ] Who are the users ?
[3.] Who owns it and what's the history ?
[4.] how is it regarded ? how big is it?
[5.] Were there any problems ?

You can use this method for any similar exercises in the future. (1) Decide which are the most important 5 points in the passage. (2) Classify the content of the passage according to those points. (3) Summarize into one sentence for each point. (4) Make adjustements, if necessary, such as changing the points, deleting a point, and assigning two sentences to one of the remaining points etc.

Once you have come up with the 5 sentences, you can post another question for help, if necessary, or write to me.

Good Luck.


[1]Facebook is a social networking website [3] launched in 2004 thats operated and privately owned by Fb, Inc. [4] with more than 500 million active ....for every fourteen in the world. [1} Users can add people.. ... .........s organized by workplace, school, college .[3] The websites name stems from the colloquial name ........... know each other better .[2] Fb allows ...aged 13 or older to become a member of the website.
[3] Fb was founded by Mark with his roommates and fellow computer science students Ed, Du and Ch .[2] The websites membership was initially .....ol students, finally, to anyone aged 13 and over.
[5] Fb has met with some controversy ............... involved in controversy over the sale of fans and friends .
[4] 2009 Compete.com study ranked Fb ..... ........-of-the-decade 'best-of' list ,[1] saying, How on earth did we stalk our...........of Scrabulous before Fb?

參考: my past learning
2010-09-26 8:35 am
Facebook is a universal website of socialnetworking, allows people who declares to be aged 13 or above to become members.With more than 0.5 billion active users in 2010 which equals to 1/14 of theworld, Fb, which operated and privately owned by Fb, Inc., was founded by Markwith his roommates and fellow computer science students Ed, Du and Ch. in2004. Users can add people as friends, joinnetworks organized by workplace, school, college, and send them messages,update their personal profiles to notify friends about themselves, with theintention of helping students to get to know each other better.The websites membership was firstly limitedby the founders to Harvard students, but was then expanded to other colleges inside Boston , the Ivy League, and Sf University.It gradually added support for studentsat various other universities before opening to high school students, finally,to anyone aged 13 or above.Fb is controversial that it has beenblocked from time to time, in several countries including Pakistan , Syria , China , Vietnam , Iran , North Korea .It has also been banned at many workingplaces, to discourage employees from wasting time on the site. Fb's privacy hasalso been an issue, the safety of their users has been compromised several times.Fb settled a lawsuit of claims over source code and intellectual property. Thesite has also been involved in controversy over the sale of fans and friends.2009 Compete.com study ranked Fb as themost-used social network by worldwide monthly active users, followed by MySpace.Entertainment Weekly put it on its end-of-the-decade 'best-of' list, saying, “Howon earth did we stalk our exes, remember our co-workers birthday, bug ourfriends, and play a rousing game of Scrabulous before Fb?”我改咗句式,唔夠15句,大部份改得唔多
2010-09-25 7:40 pm
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